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The eternal look of the ever last companion of us all.

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hi!
if i had to crit
i'd say there is a problem with the composition.
the scythe is drawing the eye out of the page.
you can use edges of objects etc.. to your advantage to draw the eye to the main subject which is his face.
the blue in his eyes is very intense, maybe could soften a little.
i'm unsure about that orange hitting the side of his eye/nose area, because it looks like the hood is covering that side of his face.
the lighting is quite nice overall.

hopefully i am of some help *_*
Hello daruma!

First of all, thanks a lot for responding!
Second, you're right about the scythe! I've tried lots of positions with it before finishing but... maybe the problem is the scythe design itself...
In relation to the nose, I've tried to give it more depth so that´s why I've lit it up so much, but the eye should really be "not lighted".
The eyes are about quite what I wanted, but you're right about that too, since I have printed this piece yesterday and saw it for myself in "raw normal light in paper", and Just got my monitor calibrated a few days over (go figure!)
I'm thinking about remaking this piece for some time, maybe I'll just do!

Daruma, you're being a good friend in responding to me and helping me out in this, for that I´m really thankful.

My very best regards to you and keep it up, with your very good work!

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